I think that what you posted was actually very reasonable.
But, think on this, suppose you added a little content?
I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog, however suppose you
added a title that grabbed a person's attention? I
mean :: 전산쟁이의 카피질 is kinda plain. You ought to look at Yahoo's home page and note how they
create article titles to get viewers to click. You might add
a video or a related picture or two to grab
people excited about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it might bring your blog a little bit more interesting.