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added a little information? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your
website, however what if you added a title that makes people want more?
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grab people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a
pic or two to grab people excited about everything've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit more interesting.